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Re: yet my dear did not come home!
Right above the western horizon, red was shining the grand old sun, The winds in the trees made a run, as trees swayed in rhythm of unison... yet my dear ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Poem I wrote when I was 12...
describing the feel of a ghost seems weird but still the imagination of action was great. such poems need to be more descriptive. i should appriciate your brave attempt . ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Three steps ahead
well, a really long poem.................. thoughts were gloomy, never ending, sending the reader into deep agony, but still a brave attempt. reading such a long poetry needs patience in the ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: War
great flow of feeling... great depth in expression... really emerged outof heart... keep on writing such heavy stuff
Jul 22, 2008