abhi92misra

Hi There! Well it was an amazing poem! The choice of words was good, and the description was highly vivid. There was a certain flow to the whole poem which ...

Hey Lava. I have attached my short story - it's a romantic one. Waiting for your review :)

Hey Nathalie! I would really appreciate it if you reviewed my post God's Gift. THis is my first post. Waiting for your comments. :) yours Abhishek

Hi! Well the story is really nice. The language used is captivating and the grammar is precise. The one thing that I really liked about your piece is that you ...

Hey Zephion. First of all I must say that it was a very good effort from your part. The story was funny overall with the end being even funnier. However, ...

Hello maybe. Well first up, I feel that the structure and grammar, the choice of words and description of your story are very good. You have an ability to "paint ...

Hello All!! :D My name is Abhishek Misra and I have just joined YWS. From what I've explored so far, I've found this forum very interesting. Although since I'm a ...

Hi there, Greatman. Listen what you wrote was okay - the idea you wanted to convey was good, but the entire piece was not well structured. You need to be ...

GOD’S GIFT The pale white half moon, almost inconspicuous in the vast pitch black sky, cast its feeble rays into the omnipresent darkness in a helpless attempt to overcome the ...