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you obviously tried to write a good poem but i found it incredibly cliche and not well thought out. i guess if it was done really really really well, the ...

hmmm. good ideas. i enjoyed your vibrant discriptions but, i have to say, i strongly discourage the use of exclaimation points. a good writer and poet should be able to ...

i liked the theme of your poem and i thought you did a very good job of showing your feelings through it but, i think you could improve it. for ...

[pre]Lena (Ukraine 1931) The ice, like a dome of death, a cold winter in the middle of spring. All this in her eyes which used to sparkle in the sunlight, ...