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I like the overall meaning. It's true that the world is a one big masquerade and everyone hides behind his mask :D Only one point: the rhyming is so confusing. ...

I super like your piece! It makes me crave for watermelons although it's wet season already in the country :D I find it clever for you to go with watermelon ...

Hello! I like your story. I want to see more of it! Yes, I do think you might consider adding more paragraphs but that's a great start! Thumbs up! :) ...

I like it...good for a desktop wallpaper or a poster :D It's simple but it already has it all. Sometimes, simplicity is really the best choice. Um...just one question: "amoung?" ...

"fog surrounds me, a deepening mist......": I ain't really sure about the punctuation you used because I rarely see it in poems but maybe it'll be interesting if the punctuation ...

I remember the poems I wrote last year because of a guy, by your work. I can really relate myself on your poem. Gosh, my heart is somewhat jumping again! ...

I'm getting its meaning :) It's true that God creates ONLY beauty and humans are the ones who creates ugliness by destroying creation :D

aw... such a touching piece! I like it. I remember the days when I was writing poems because of the inspiration of a person.

My characters always talk, telling me what to write down about their story :D

How many reviews can we make in one day?

I like it. It has a good humor. The mood of your literary piece is light. I like your theme: HARRY POTTER! My friend and I are really addicted to ...

I like your title. It's really engaging. But, I find your story lacking something. Maybe, you could use more powerful words C: Thanks!

I like it. It makes me thirsty of reading another story :P

Very good. I think you're speaking about death? Sorry if I am mistaken. The poem is really pretty. I wish I could write poems the same as you. C:

I very much agree with Demoness. But, I do think the poem was pretty nice. :D