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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Perfect Girl

    Wow! I like your poem - truly touching and full of emotions. I love how you chose your words which makes your poem so alive. Thumbs up! xD Keep writing ...

    Sep 21, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: From Here on Out

    I truly enjoyed the theme and the concept of your poem. Shocks! I love your avatar (I don't know how it is called)! Simply because I also love Math :)) ...

    Sep 20, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: The before and after of slapping someone with a wet fish.

    Hello! I love the poem. It is something optimistic and humorous :D I can't really criticize it since I already find it good. Just keep writing! Thumbs up! :D

    Sep 7, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: I Wanted to Change My Name

    I like it! The poem was so touching! I won't criticize your work anymore since I find it really good! Thumbs up! Keep writing :)

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Window

    Hello! I'll rate your poem as good :) I find it easy to understand. Well done! I can just see correction: "Your With Me" This is the common mistake I ...

    Sep 1, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Solitude

    I love your poem! I can truly relate on it :D especially on your ending line :D I won't criticize your work anymore since I already find it good. Keep ...

    Aug 31, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Bunny Fluffy

    Hahahaha!!! Nice! Good humor! Is this a joke or what? :P

    Aug 27, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Do You Remember the Garden?

    I love your imagery! :D You just exactly described what a girl feels. It is simple but full of life and meaning! I won't criticize your work anymore since I ...

    Aug 25, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Grace

    Short but really truly amazing! It sounds deep but it's not really that too hard to understand :D This is what they call "Write to express, not to impress. " ...

    Aug 24, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Im Too Young For Love

    Hello! I just noticed some corrections: "But.... Im To Young For Love." The "Im" is not punctuated. It should be "I'm" then the "To" must be "too." "Dont Want Love." ...

    Aug 21, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Lame Girl's Crash

    Within these four corners, Walls of lies, fake laughters, Been talking to myself once more As the flower starts to wither It's kinda insane But compared to sanity, This is ...

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Other Re: If you're talking to the moon

    I find this piece really clever. I like it :D Well done :D I won't correct it anymore since it's not really that necessary. Good job! Keep it up!

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Love Is

    "Even love has to go...Even love has to die...Others leave altogether...And love is a game." I like the topic of your poem. I thought it's something like an inspirational theme ...

    Aug 12, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Divided Heart

    It is what I am just feeling right now. :"C I'm really confused. I like your piece. Thanks for posting it! :D

    Aug 12, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: nightmare

    I really liked the description :D Nice choice of words! You got a very interesting way of picturing the scene. It has a dark color and I like it, rawr. ...

    Aug 10, 2011


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