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Re: My Perfect Girl
Wow! I like your poem - truly touching and full of emotions. I love how you chose your words which makes your poem so alive. Thumbs up! xD Keep writing ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: From Here on Out
I truly enjoyed the theme and the concept of your poem. Shocks! I love your avatar (I don't know how it is called)! Simply because I also love Math :)) ...
Sep 20, 2011 -
Re: The before and after of slapping someone with a wet fish.
Hello! I love the poem. It is something optimistic and humorous :D I can't really criticize it since I already find it good. Just keep writing! Thumbs up! :D
Sep 7, 2011 -
Re: I Wanted to Change My Name
I like it! The poem was so touching! I won't criticize your work anymore since I find it really good! Thumbs up! Keep writing :)
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: Window
Hello! I'll rate your poem as good :) I find it easy to understand. Well done! I can just see correction: "Your With Me" This is the common mistake I ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: Solitude
I love your poem! I can truly relate on it :D especially on your ending line :D I won't criticize your work anymore since I already find it good. Keep ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: Bunny Fluffy
Hahahaha!!! Nice! Good humor! Is this a joke or what? :P
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Do You Remember the Garden?
I love your imagery! :D You just exactly described what a girl feels. It is simple but full of life and meaning! I won't criticize your work anymore since I ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Grace
Short but really truly amazing! It sounds deep but it's not really that too hard to understand :D This is what they call "Write to express, not to impress. " ...
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Im Too Young For Love
Hello! I just noticed some corrections: "But.... Im To Young For Love." The "Im" is not punctuated. It should be "I'm" then the "To" must be "too." "Dont Want Love." ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: The Lame Girl's Crash
Within these four corners, Walls of lies, fake laughters, Been talking to myself once more As the flower starts to wither It's kinda insane But compared to sanity, This is ...
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: If you're talking to the moon
I find this piece really clever. I like it :D Well done :D I won't correct it anymore since it's not really that necessary. Good job! Keep it up!
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: Love Is
"Even love has to go...Even love has to die...Others leave altogether...And love is a game." I like the topic of your poem. I thought it's something like an inspirational theme ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: Divided Heart
It is what I am just feeling right now. :"C I'm really confused. I like your piece. Thanks for posting it! :D
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: nightmare
I really liked the description :D Nice choice of words! You got a very interesting way of picturing the scene. It has a dark color and I like it, rawr. ...
Aug 10, 2011
