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I am once a little lass Sitting by the grass, Looking up on the skies, And my dreams are past the stars I always ask myself this and that How ...

I didn't really read the full essay. I only had read the beginning, middle, and end, and by judging from it, I could see it is a beautiful story. Thumbs ...

Nice! I super love the poem. You've got a unique style and kudos to you :) Thumbs up! Keep writing :D

I love your title: Passenger Seat. It gives your poem a mystery. I love it! I love how you ended your poem. It was definitely nice. "but you lived in ...

Gosh! It was so beautiful! Well-written. Your imagination was extremely wide. Everything's so magical. You have the hands of a good writer. (Bow) Thumbs up! Keep writing. :)

Wow! I like the words you used and the rhythm of your poem :) Thumbs up! Keep writing. Thanks for the poem, by the way.

I liked it. It was a very short story but it made my heart sing again for it makes me remember someone. You made a very good beginning and ended ...

I like your poem. It was well-written. The words you used were just appropriate for the poem touched my heart. It was so endearing. I love its meaning and the ...

I like your poem. Your words fitted exactly to the emotions. You've really explained a girl's feelings. Maybe, you could only use some punctuations. It would help your poem look ...

I like the structure of your poem, as well as the theme. I like the picture up there which made clear of what you were saying about. Just a suggestion: ...

I like your poem. The words you used were simple which were better. I find no flaws. I just don't know if my eyes didn't see. Thumbs up! Keep writing ...

I can totally relate myself to the poem :) You chose simple words but they did fit to explain your thoughts. I totally love it! Thank you for sharing your ...

aw....I love the poem! It's so cute and full of emotions. Actually, my eyes got blurred while reading this especially the last part - the lines that says you'll do ...

I write everyday since I'm always updating my diary :) It's a form of my practice to write with speed.

Super like: a poem dedicated to Nate! He sure would be pleased when he learns this. I find no mistakes 'cos I wasn't really looking for any. Writing is to ...