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Love the shading. It makes the characters look... kinda ethreal. Or another word that I can't think of right now.

So...pretty...@_@ You draw anime eyes way better than I do. :D

Another good chapter; I spotted some issues with grammar and spelling, but I'll cut you some slack since you already said that you've been having issues with that since you ...

Once again, kitty15 already found all of the typos. :lol: Glad to see that you continued the story, now we're starting to get a bit more characterization and story problem. ...

A tingly feeling rushed up Elis' back and she bit her lip to fight the urge to shiver. Something was wrong, but she didn't know what. At the front of ...

no, when i have time to really come on i'll bring it back. YAY! :D

... died a long and painful death... *pokes debug mode* Yup. Still dead.

I just tried to view a portfolio and got the longest error message I've seen in my life. :shock: Scary, but I know you guys will work it out. :D

Soooo... I'm assuming that the storybook is dead. :cry:

OOC: I'm baaaaaaaack! :D Sorry that I didn't post, I got out of school a week ago and before that I was swamped with final projects... @_@ Anyway, I'll post ...

Wow, that was better than I expected. Truth be told, I thought I was going to have to lecture you on proper spelling once I saw the description under the ...

Yeah, kitty15 already hit the typo problem. Just put your text into whatever word processor you have on your computer and preform a spellcheck and you should be fine. Other ...

Cool. Yay. :D I was hoping that it wasn't going to be one of those, you're too good of a writer for that, Dynamo. :wink:

Heeey... No offense, Dynamo, but I've seen this story structure before. Your character gets sucked into the game and gets to fight alongside his favorite video game characters, am I ...

To be blatantly honest, I adore character development. I will love any story, no matter how cliched the storyline, if it has believable, deep characters. I agree with Duskglimmer; the ...