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I said it basically in the name but I'll repeat it Why do boys feel the need to wear their trousers around their bums or ankles? I'm sick of hearing ...

There isn't much else to say really, they basically covered it. Maybe the story could do with a bit more substance, i.e. a bit more of an introduction about the ...

I just finished reading your first chapter. I'm so sorry for been critical, i'm not this mean but i think when people write they should hear the truth. Before you ...