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Re: Siren's Call *Part 2*
"I can't believe I missed the fifth! And my arpeggios! Come on now. Get it together, Zander. You are a world renowned musician that is playing for extremely wealthy individuals ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Nobles and Beggars: Chapter 1
Ello WaitingForLife! :D I'm here to review your piece(Of course). Now, spelling mistakes will be red , original text in italic, comments or questions I have in blue , original ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Siren's Call *Part 2*
Ello ClinicalCynic! I'm here to review your piece! Again! :P I didn't expect another posted so soon. Be careful though. You can only post two things a day before you ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Medic Man
I like the way you wrote this. :D It's different from what I see on here usually. Though it was confusing because I didn't understand what was happening and what ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
What up people! Zero here! Yeah, don't call me by my full user name, it's just Zero (or Demon :P). I have another user profile on here, but I'm starting ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: The Teachers (a screenplay) [part 1]
I LOVED this! It made me laugh so many times! XD It was a very enjoyable read and I can't wait for part two. The only thing I would add ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Education: In A Different Approach
Wow. Is it a bad thing I can relate so well. XD This seems all so very true. I'm in the 10th grade and I'll just say it now, my ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Siren's Call
Ello ClinicalCynic! You're new here too! :D Well, let me get you a review then, yes? Spelling corrections will be in red , the original text in italics, questions or ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Someday
This poem had bittersweet written all over it. I love it and I'm sure your boyfriend will love it! I'm sad for you though and I hope you will feel ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: Metal Hearts - Chapter 1
Ello MilkNCookies! :D (Love the name!) I will review your story this fine day :P Spelling corrections will be in red , the original text in italics, questions will be ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: The Begining
I joined this story a lot. It's like your own version on the Greek or Roman gods and I always enjoyed their stories. :] I found a few misspellings and ...
Jan 25, 2011
