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Hi, here are some of your mistakes. “Do you really wish for me to kill you?” Tristen asked his face only an inch from my own, his breath e caressing ...

I must say I really enjoyed reading this. I think it was well narrated and it had its own humor too. These are the kind of things I want to ...

It was a nice letter. I saw a few mistakes. Like for one spelling. You spelled ridiulous wrong it's not rediculus. but its not a big deal I too am ...

I really enjoyed reading your story. I like your usage of words. I like how the story was so detailed on how the characters felt. You gained another follower, Keep ...

Its a nice piece, I think it was well written. To me this piece is about searching for your type of guy, which is John. I enjoyed reading, but someparts ...

This kind of things usually happen in life. It's hard to see someones true colors. I really liked the poem. The ending was very powerful. Keep writting. :)

The thought of the poem was nice specially the ending. Keep writting :)

This reminds me of my friend and her boyfriend. My friend loves him, hates him and when there far away from each other she misses him so much. This is ...

Thank you for your suggestions. I will put some changes :)

It was such a cute story, but why did the dad do so? Nice poem by the way. Keep it up :)

Thank you for your suggestions. I made some changes with it. Pls correct them again if you must :)

Rose felt her heart break into a million pieces, as she watched her beloved walk out the door. Rose could not bear the pain, yet she still watched him go. ...

Thank you for all your suggestions.

There was a guy named Max. He was such a heart rob in is school. Most of the girls who dint have a boyfriend chased after Max. Max on the ...