Zorakero

I like my idea, but I need help with it. I'm kindof lost if you can't tell from the story. Not with the plot, but with making it flow nicely ...

I do appreciate the criticism. I have very few minutes to work on my stories so I usually miss the obvious, since I'm trying to write down ideas before I ...

NOTE: This is the first paragraph of a short story I'm writing. It is by no means perfect, and I left my notes/word choices in. But let me know what ...

I like the last few words. It's a nice scene ending :D The idea is definately cool and you should continue on with it.

A beginning, or perhaps an ending, that's as far as I've been able to get. I wrote this a year ago and have been waiting for inspiration and time to ...

Thanks for the replies :) I'm not really into peoms this was a more of a practice run since I'm new to the site... I wrote this in sixth grade...which ...

The Lone Mountain All alone, yet sturdy and proud Sat a mountain among the cloud. No one had reached the tallest peak; For, it seemed, they were just too weak. ...