Zombiemonkey

SeraphTree has very good points. the only other thing I have to add is that you've got a spelling error. "I open my mouth to scream, but I chock on ...

I'm not sure if you should site where you got the statements from. I know that I was told to mention quotes and such with a sitation in the essay. ...

I'm so happy to have helped inspire you to write this ^_^ I don't know much about poetry to a critique it properly. Still, I find the poem to be ...

thank you for all of your replies!^_^ the only reason the cobweb is in the picture, is because I was bored during class. I had wanted to put one those ...

there's even some math to look at ^_^