Zibbie

wow this is sooo good. It almost gave me chills. I really love the imagery this whole poem creates, and the language you use is so stimulating, my favorite verse ...

I really liked how you introduced all the characters in the first paragraphs. It sets up the story nicely. I also liked the beginning and end. Especially how you ended ...

Lizzie skimmed through the pages of Benjamin’s Romeo and Juliet book. It had been assigned earlier that week and Ben had kept it in his shoulder bag to sneak in ...

really cool! do you draw these as doodles or something? :elephant: