Zibbie

:) :elephant: cute story cherry

Cool! I like the idea and the characters, her sister Teddy sounds like she could be very interesting :) Now for the dirty nitpicks... For as long as I can ...

Really liked the whole piece over all! Not a lot of grammatical mistakes, but there were some parts that confused me. It was ripped two months prematurely from its source. ...

i like. too tiered to review but its been covered POST MOREEEEE!

Thanks so much apple! i made all the changes before i handed it in :) zib

Hi! Okay I'm a but of a procrastinator, i'll admit, but i have this essay due tomorrow, and i would really appreciate if someone would help me correct it. :) ...

Yay! love this story. You're probably tiered of my reviews, but you asked for it! The carriage that was carrying the princess was late to arrive. Okay, I'd rather this ...

I can't help it, I'd feel bad if i read the chapter and didn't review. All of a sudden, I was very aware of how quiet it was in my ...

Hi Rekats I'm a newbie too :) This story is a breath of fresh air. I LOVED it. I don't even have any nitpicks, which i know must be disappointing, ...

I like! it has a good plot, like a serial liar or something. Anyways nitpicks... She was trying to flirt with. me no period between with and me seated at ...

hi Butterfly! Okay i started reading and first thing i see... Your story starts with I looked out of the window it was raining that is not going to get ...

Hi Zib here to review Okay i really liked this because it was super descriptive and had a good flow. Just some parts that were hard to understand, but maybe ...

Chapter 3 “Okay.” It seemed like a pretty underwhelming response, but that was all Lizzie could muster while her head felt like it was going to explode. “What else?” “Uh..um… ...

hi Pawprint! Okay so i like the mysterious feel this prologue sets up, and i can tell its going to be an interesting story. I (sorry seraphtree) like that she ...

Bonjour Navita! étant a moitié parisienne je me sens responsable de t'écrire en français. T'a vraiment écrit un poème de 30 pages? je n'aurais jamais assez de patience de le ...