Zibbie

Hey CW! I like the way you stated everything in a matter of fact way, it was a different style of approaching Rue's character. Only problem was the lack of ...

Oh Esther! Long time no story telling! First thing I read back on YWS and i couldn't be more glad I'm back. Please never stop writing. It seems all the ...

This was cool! I like the plot, and it sounds like it will be super interesting! "Leila shock her head" I think you mean shook! Unless she's also able to ...

So i love the whole idea of the Mortal instruments (and Clockwork Angel!) books, so i decided to write an original story with the same idea but different plot and ...

Kadee got it all! yay, happy birthday to meee! And it's almost the 4th of july so happy independance day to you! I understand what you mean about not being ...

i LOVE veronica mars, and i think this sounds like a good idea. But definitely not logan, unless you can find a way to make him seem like less of ...

Yep it's long, but because you asked nicely ill try and review it as best as i can :) She stopped near a bench and wiped the leave off of ...

Okay so i think i was totally off track with the Alex being gay thing. I'm so excited to read more! Just so long as you avoid squirrely's advice, I ...

Hey White Shadow! I'm Zib, and I love where this story is going. I really like the ways you just alluded to the fact he might be a vampire, and ...

hey! its been i while since i reviewed anything so I'm sorry if its rusty. Nitpicks! Doesn't mean Ms. Queen Bee has to know she can find out from some ...

Im sorry i posted the wrong part of the chapter and now i can't figure out how to delete!! :(

It sounds like a good plot in the novel description, but i read the prologue and was left feeling confused. I would firstly describe who "they" are, like you did ...

I love it! your description is fabulous and very creative. Soon, however, Thosol looked out into the vast space and sighed, for it possessed all of the joys that the ...

Pretty much all the nitpicks have been covered. I still really like this story! Its got alot of diffrent twists and im curious about why Alex keeps telling the princesses ...

Hey! that's awsome i like your music. Have you heard the new song by B.o.b ft hailey williams from paramore? It's called airplanes, and it helped me right a story ...