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Re: Memoirs of a Teenage Wallflower
Thank you Dems and WD! :D I'll get right into fixing my mistakes and revising this post in the future! Irish: Her older brother's name is Winter Storm, HER name ...
Oct 13, 2009 -
Re: Memoirs of a Teenage Wallflower
Hi guys! Zephy here and I decided to post this first piece of my novel, 'Memoirs of a Teenage Wallflower", for constructive criticism. I know it feels like I left ...
Oct 13, 2009 -
Re: Why not the Gentleman?
Hi, I'm Zephy and I'll be reviewing your piece! :D Why not the gentleman?! I feel so sorry for him! I'd choose the gentleman!!! CHARACTERS: I love them all! Clara ...
Oct 12, 2009 -
Re: The Simple Truth
Hi, I'm Zephy and I'll be reviewing your piece! :D This was nice. An inspirational piece! I loved it! GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION: No mistakes located! *though it's late and I'm really tired ...
Oct 12, 2009 -
Re: Golden Moon Ch. 1 P1
Hi there Turity! I'm Zephy and I'm going to be reviewing your piece! :D *my first ACTUAL review >.>* Anyway! Okay so wow! This was quite amazing, I was hooked! ...
Oct 12, 2009 -
Re: Fresh Meat!
Hi Monki! Yes, you could call me a grammar Nazi, I have like severe OCD when it comes down to it. XD Those poems get on my nerves so bad, ...
Sep 20, 2009 -
Re: Fresh Meat!
Hello and good day, I'm Zephy! Well, more or so known as Peyton here in the real world. I'm fourteen years old and have been attempting and failing at writing ...
Sep 19, 2009
