Zelalem

sorry, ignore this. :oops:

thanks so much! yeah actually, the link to my art website is at the top of my first post!

Thank You!

Knowing all too well that they’d trade the taste For a goodnight’s kiss How true. I love this poem. Especially the ending.

That's such a sweet poem. But the story you have is very sad...

Wow I do like chewing gum! Can you guys which flavor? (clue: trident is the brand.) .................... ................... ................... .................. It's Tropical Flavor!

THINGS YOU DON'T KNOW ABOUT ME: I'm trying to post things here that aren't in my profile! (It's hard!) 1. I'm horrible at thinking up usernames so my username is ...

This poem was amazing! One of my favorites! But I think it would be a lot better with Nicole Lynn's punctuation edits. It makes it seem more...real. Great job. Really ...

I really like this poem. Great Job! It has a great message, keep up the good work.

Thank you so much for the comment! Question: Are people on YWS supposed to thank people for commenting? On Deviantart it's extremely rude to not thank somebody, (unless you get ...

Thanks so much Angel!

Thank You so much WritersDomain (and Xanath again.) You guys really help me! I didn't originally put much thought into this poem because it was a quick thing I did ...

Okay thank you so much! I'll be adding more to this soon and editing it. Perhaps posting a revised version on this thread. I really have to work on rhythms ...

We all watch what we're doing, Every moment, Every day, Our movements can be misleading, And we do watch what we say, It's as if we're under a watchful eye, ...

Thanks for all your help! (Man people on this site are really nice.) I'll try to revise this poem soon!