Zeek_Weasel

I've read the whole series, Uglies series, too. I really like Scott's writing type. He is really good at coming up with plot twists that you jsut don't see coming.

Well, I must say you rose some good points. I know I put that at the end about it sucking, but one: I say that about everything I do. I ...

Hmm, well, I guess I need to revise kinda badly...

Hmm, anyone find any mahor errors or problems that I can fix in my revision? I've read over this a few times and I'm rather happy with it, though I ...

Okay everyone, I've revised this once so far and edited once. So, come on and hit me with your best shot! :elephant:

Thank you, and I think I'll call you Stella. Well, like I've possibly said before, I wrote this on the seat of my pants without much prepping at all. I ...

I thank you for the review, dude. It realy helps my writing ability. I'm glad you think this is humorous and that it's full of the teenage point of view, ...

Woops, forgot something. I should probably put a little more emphasis on why his parents are acting so weird. Honestly, they are holding information. They were told more than what ...

Okay, firstly, thanks for the comment. I really appreciate it. Secondly, at the very beggining, I said I was making a story string. This is only the first part of ...