Zeek_Weasel

Oh, I've read a few of the Redwall books. My favorite is a tie between Lord Brocktree and Tagerung. I normally hate fantasy in this sense, the medial sense. Yet ...

Hello, there, Magic! Good to see you here with us. Nice to see a fellow starting writer (I say starting because you just posted here. I don't know how much ...

Hello, again. I must say this is a very good one-shot story. I only spotted a few mistakes, grammar and spelling wise, really, being that that's all I can correct ...

Very good, dude. Very good indeed. Though there are problems that need addressing. One: Spelling. You've got a good number of spelling errors presented in this writing of yours. I ...

To put it simplt in one word: A-ma-zing! I love this plot idea you've weaved. I have trouble finding fault in it, though that doesn't mean I didn't find fault ...

Wow. That is all I can say. I came to this story looking for something that I could critique, but I found nothing that would be of need for that. ...

Hello, please allow me to be your first reviewer. Well, I'll be honest. This story has some good potential, but unles you practice good grammar, it will never be as ...