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Re: Mentally Complicated [Part 1; Revised, not vulgure}
Woops, forgot something. I should probably put a little more emphasis on why his parents are acting so weird. Honestly, they are holding information. They were told more than what ...
Feb 19, 2010 -
Re: Mentally Complicated [Part 1; Revised, not vulgure}
Okay, firstly, thanks for the comment. I really appreciate it. Secondly, at the very beggining, I said I was making a story string. This is only the first part of ...
Feb 19, 2010 -
Re: Mentally Complicated [Part 1; Revised, not vulgure}
[This is only part 1 of this story idea I had. Keep in mind as you read this and the others to come that I am making a story thread. ...
Feb 19, 2010 -
Re: The Start of a Journey
Wow. That is all I can say. I came to this story looking for something that I could critique, but I found nothing that would be of need for that. ...
Dec 29, 2009 -
Re: The Chaos Flame
Hello, please allow me to be your first reviewer. Well, I'll be honest. This story has some good potential, but unles you practice good grammar, it will never be as ...
Dec 28, 2009