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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: "Pandora's Box"

    This is a good poem, freestyle write? (ahh writers puns! :D) I like this poem but a few comma placements are kinda awkward, like the comma between 'there' and 'if ...

    Jul 27, 2012


“A good book isn't written, it's rewritten.”
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