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A pen in my hand, A crumpled napkin in front of me, An idea forming. Quickly i jot the idea down, Before I lose it forever. Some people think writing ...

This is pretty good work here, Biffle. Makes me curious who you wrote it about or if you just made it up though. :lol: But anyway back to the point. ...

How could you ever think this was lame?! Its not just because i love poetry, honest! This has a good rhyme scheme and is very meaningful! The title fits perfectly ...

Your critic here! This was very good but remember that format is very important. A new paragraph needs to be formed when there is a new speaker at least, so ...

Wow. This was amazing. It was very repetitive, though. Change it around, add imagery or metaphors. Make it a more interesting read, something that will completely hook someone. Its sometimes ...

I'm speechless. That was one of the most amazing stories i have ever read. And i have read alot. I didn't catch on to the sucide thing until the end, ...

I loved it!! It was a mysterious and dangerous story from the beginning, but it was almost a little expected that he would kill her. That just what "dark knights" ...

(This poem takes place in a halocaust concentration camp during present day. In my English class we were learning about the Halocaust, and I got inspired. Tell me what you ...

{This is the revised Prologue from my oringnal Romantic Fiction story. But i changed the plot around so it doesn't fit anymore. Enjoy!} Prologue- I leaned forward and hugged Haydn, ...

This is a short story I wrote for english class over a girl in the Halocaust. Please tell me what you think! ... I closed my eyes, trying to remember ...

{This is the revised Prologue from my oringnal Romantic Fiction story. But i changed the plot around so it doesn't fit anymore. Enjoy!} Prologue- I leaned forward and hugged Haydn, ...

Name: Dallia Sydney Cassandra Joyce (Goes by Dallia) Gender: Female Age: 15 Role: Experiment Appearance: Blond Hair, blue eyes, Always wears a black v-neck tee shirt and dark skinny jeans ...

Wow. I honestly have to say I know exactly what this poem is about... Its really good though and you should keep writing, just keep to somewhat happier subjects. {Even ...

Oh don't worry. There will be a chapter one! About Asher- Why am I talking?! Its just a secret you will have to read about! ~Cassi :elephant:

Thanks! ~Cassi