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Re: Paths by James Goh
It's really long but really cool to!!!!!!!!! :smt038 :smt038 :smt038 :smt041 :smt041 :smt041 :smt041 Keep writing, your pretty good! -zappy77
Nov 9, 2007 -
Re: Retrieving a Swallowed Watch
It's really good and it sort of reminds me of the "Frog Princess" except a lot more bloody! :twisted: - zappy77 8)
Nov 8, 2007 -
Re: Thomas & The Fog 3.5
I agree, it gets a little confusing. But it has a very good story line and I really like the characters! :D - zappy77 8)
Nov 8, 2007 -
Re: Creation
It's pretty good! :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: I like how you wrote so little but said so much. :smt041 - zappy77 8)
Nov 8, 2007 -
Re: the wind
It's pretty good! Except I agree that you could have used some more desciptive words. But overall, really good! :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: -zappy77 8)
Nov 8, 2007 -
Re: "Degrating"
It's kinda... weird isn't the word I'm looking for... DEMENTED!!!!!! I don't mean to hurt you but... IT'S DEMENTED! Were you depressed or something when you wrote it????? FIX IT!!!!!!!!! ...
Nov 8, 2007