Zappy77

My Bridge My bridge has stood through warmth and cold, And it has held both young and old. It has stood for many years, And it has felt both happiness ...

It's really long but really cool to!!!!!!!!! :smt038 :smt038 :smt038 :smt041 :smt041 :smt041 :smt041 Keep writing, your pretty good! -zappy77

Awsome picture, I could never paint like that!!!!!!! :smt026 :smt026 :smt026 :smt026 :smt026 :smt026 :smt026 :smt026 :smt026 :smt026 :smt026 :smt026 :smt026 :smt026 There is actually nothing wrong wit

It's really good and it sort of reminds me of the "Frog Princess" except a lot more bloody! :twisted: - zappy77 8)

I agree, it gets a little confusing. But it has a very good story line and I really like the characters! :D - zappy77 8)

It's pretty good! :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: I like how you wrote so little but said so much. :smt041 - zappy77 8)

It's pretty good! Except I agree that you could have used some more desciptive words. But overall, really good! :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: -zappy77 8)

It's kinda... weird isn't the word I'm looking for... DEMENTED!!!!!! I don't mean to hurt you but... IT'S DEMENTED! Were you depressed or something when you wrote it????? FIX IT!!!!!!!!! ...

Hey, poems sound pretty cool. That's a lot better then I can do! I pretty good at writing storys but poems don't come up very often! koolio!, zappy77