ZannaShepherd

Ok your short story (heavy on the short) but that's ok; Everyone knows garbage men pick up garbage, but this garbage man is a little different than most. He's not ...

Ok, I really enjoyed the rhythm of your story. It flowed relatively smoothly, (except for some parts that I will point out later) and had a slow meandering pace. kind ...

Ok, I really enjoyed this bit of what seems could well be the start of a great story. Your writing was captivating, but a little full of description, It was ...

Ok, I liked the idea you had writing a story about Oompa Loompa's, but your story was very confusing and hard to follow. You also kept changing you're tenses and ...

Ok, your story was very (VERY) descriptive, and I could picture everything very vividly, so great job with that! This piece had a very unique style, and an interesting development. ...

Ok, wow this piece or writing could be the start of something great! By the end of the chapter, I'm dying to know more. I love the way you place ...

Hi Dakota, Sorry I haven't had time to review your work yet, it's very long and will take me weeks (maybe months) to review all of it. (I've already read ...

Hi Dakota, Sorry I haven't had time to review your work yet, it's very long and will take me weeks (maybe months) to review all of it. (I've already read ...

Hi Dakota, Sorry I haven't had time to review your work yet, it's very long and will take me weeks (maybe months) to review all of it. (I've already read ...

Ok, I have to hand it to you, your story was amazing. At least in detail, I love how you did the story in first person, and the description and ...

Ok, I'm so glad you wrote more, Sorry I haven't been on sooner to read it and review it. This is a great part, I really liked the ending, it ...

Just let me say, this work is a great poem (what else should I expect from you but only the very best!). You are very talented, when it comes to ...

Your poem is very full of emotion, as most of your work seems to be, which is amazing! This piece is very captivating, and flows smoothly. Where do you get ...

Ok, let me just say that this was awesome! You have a way with words, that some of us (speaking about me here) totally lack. From the first paragraph, Liquid ...

Wow, this poem has a gripping effect, it makes the reader feel the churning emotions of the writer, and the depth of feeling the author has held up inside. This ...