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ZannaShepherd

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Liar

    Liar By day I live this fantastic lie A lie I will live ‘til the day that I die I laugh, I smile, I joke, I tease so everyone believes ...

    Aug 29, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Cosmos (Outer Space) Part 9

    Scars we don't want to stitch~ He seemed, older. More worn out than the last time I’d seen him. His curly golden locks were longer than I’d ever seen them ...

    Aug 24, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Cosmos (Outer Space) Part 8

    Stars we don't want to reach~ I stared in despair at the calendar I held. Three pages were filled with thirty to thirty-one red x’s. I flipped the now full ...

    Aug 24, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Cosmos (Outer Space) Part 7

    This is where stories go~ Lush green grass surrounded me, its soft texture greeting me as I lay in its embrace. Opening my eyes, bright blue sky stretched on as ...

    Aug 24, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Cosmos (Outer Space) Part 6

    That's what the movies show~ “Lame, lame, lame.” Everything that surrounded me was absolutely primeval. It was almost like these humans were living in the destruction from a holocaust or ...

    Aug 22, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Seas of Gold

    I Loved it! Especially the first part We look forever, not grasping what we have. We can use our eyes to find the hope in everyone, But we just find ...

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Cosmos (Outer Space) Part 5

    We have our minutes cut~ I stood, breathing hard outside of the building from which I’d just escaped. Shoving my hands against my ears, I clenched my eyes shut, and ...

    Jul 29, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Cosmos (Outer Space) Part 4

    Kill for the second best~ I rested my head against the inside panel of the hovercraft, the cool metal a welcomed distraction from my pounding headache and roiling stomach. I ...

    Jul 27, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Cosmos (Outer Space) Part 3

    “I said no, Pixie, and that’s final,” Lion admonished from his place at the head of the table. “I told you so,” Chess gloated from the other side of the ...

    Jul 18, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Diverting Illusions: Chapter One

    Hi, Ok, I really enjoyed your story, it resembled warriors well, but I like how you took from the aspect of a loner instead of a clan cat. You're descriptions ...

    Jul 15, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Cosmos (Outer Space) Part 2

    Games we don't want to play ~ With the dishes cleared, cleaned, and put away, I finished wiping off the table and took my seat with everyone else. “So, now ...

    Jul 13, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Soulless

    Hi Dakota, Like, Wow! I Totally loved this piece of your writing, cliche’s and all. (Of course, I mean it’s you we’re talking about here). Anywho, I only found a ...

    Jul 12, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Time to wake up Buttercup

    Hi, I'm here as requested. I really liked your story, the plot was very intriguing and well paced. I did notice that you tend to change tenses a lot, and ...

    Jul 12, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Tears of a Fairy

    Thank you so much to everyone, who read and reviewed/commented on Tears of a Fairy! I re-edited it, and I hope I was able to improve it. Feel free to ...

    Jul 12, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]

    Hi, I have a couple pieces, I'd love to get reviews for. Cosmos (Outer Space)- Fantasy Short Stories No Air - Romantic Thank you! ~Zanna

    Jul 12, 2011


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