ZannaShepherd

Thanks Stella, I really appreciate your review and I fixed all of the errors. Friend & Teammate ~Zanna :D

This is a really nice piece of writing. I enjoyed it immensely, especially your great description! :D The way you wrote it made it seem like it was a true ...

This part also needs a lot of editing: Do you think that it will be possible to speak to her?” you could put 'would' instead of will. sure ill transfer.'I'll' ...

Hi, Since it's just a rough draft, I'm sure you haven't fully edited it, but a few of the sentences are incomplete, and sometimes it seem a little rushed. In ...

Fantasist The autumn breeze blew across the room, ruffling the curtains by the open window. As it flew, it teased and played with the slumbering child's golden hair. Stirring slightly, ...

Please review my short story 'Fantasist'. It's and entry for the contest 'which path to take'. I would really enjoy hearing your thoughts on it. Fantasy Fiction G ~Zanna

Hi, I really need reviews for my short story 'Fantasist'. It's an entry for the contest 'which path to take'. Anything helps! Fantasy Fiction G Thanks ~Zanna

Hi, I'm in some desperate need for reviews! I need my sort story 'Fantasist' to get some reviews. It's an entry for 'which path to take'. Fantasy Fiction G ~Zanna

Hi, I really need reviews for my short story Fantasist. It's an entry for 'which path to take' contest. Anything is helpful! Fantasy Fiction G ~Zanna

Hi, I was wondering if you could review my story for the 'which path to take' contest? ~Zanna

Hi I was wondering if you could review my story for the contest 'which path to take'. It's title is 'Fantasist', G, and I really need some reviews for it. ...

The rough autumn wind blew harshly though the room, ruffling the curtains in front of the open window, and teasingly played with the slumbering girl’s golden blonde hair. Stirring slightly, ...