ZannaShepherd

I sat curled up in a layer of mismatched blankets on the single cot in the ‘girls’ room. I wasn’t cold or uncomfortable, but I just couldn’t sleep. My mind ...

Outer space, outer space~ “I don’t need you. . .” I couldn’t get Chess’s angry voice out of my head. Even with the distraction of my hardcore cleaning it was ...

Hello, For a short story, I'd say yours was very well written. It did seem to move fast at times, but that's mostly unavoidable. I really liked the concept of ...

“A church?” I glanced to my left, where Pixie was surveying the lonely scene before us with obvious contempt. “Yeah?” Josh, half asked, half stated, not seeming to get why ...

It broke today. It wasn’t even intentional and could’ve easily enough been replaced, but to me it symbolized the truth of my life. That one long scar provided a better ...

Sorry about the weird spacing, not sure why it did that, and I don't know how to fix it.

This is our secret place~ I sat ridged in the seat furthest away from the driver, three rows back. The feeling of complete wrongness still persisted on beating away at ...

Crowds, we will face them down~ “Breaking News. Fifty seven year old, Ralph Snider from Texas claims to have come into contact with, what he thinks may have been the ...

I really liked the beginning of your story, and it was quite well written. There are a few nitpicks I'll point out, but most of your problem is that you ...

Clouds - we will chase them out~ Aliens. Every single site, page, or web cast I flipped through had something to say about aliens. Everyone, from Joe schmo living on ...

Ok, this is a 250 word piece, with the beginining and ending words the same. (contest rules.) I hope you enjoy, I'm not used to writing such short stories, so ...

I love Beauty and the Beast! I read through your story, blue is what I like, and red is things you should change (I changed most of them already. I’m ...

Fly away, time machine~ Love. . .love. . .love. Unh, no matter how many times I said it, or different ways I said it, I still couldn’t grasp the meaning ...

Ok, this was just a short story I sat down and wrote, because I wanted something to write. It's only lightly edited, so feel free to let loose on the ...

Thank you to everyone who reviewed this. I really don't know how to write poetry, but my computer broke and so I was bored and started scribbling in a notebook, ...