Zalex

A great story. I still read it over because it is so freaky and disturbing and I never quite understand it.

Wow. Great story for your first time! My first one wasn't half as good.

Love your story that's for sure!

Yup!!

I agree with Shanan-cat! Amazingly done!

It wasn't horrible! I liked it. Trust me. My first post was horrible.

GOod!

Amazing!:)

Nice and long, like I like them!

Reminds of when I was little!

Good but a bit to short for me.

Amazing, and nice and long!

Good

That was really good and exciting!

Amazing