Zalex

By the way guys, I didn't write this. My cousin really wanted to write something so I let her.:)

I laugh. You laugh. I cry. You cry. I kiss a guy. You kiss a guy. I like Zac Efron. You like Zac Efron. You lie. I lie. You fail ...

Great message/point! I love this poem! I didn't really see anything wrong so I don't have a critique! Great Work! Zalex

Oh my gosh. This almost made me cry! A while ago my grandpa died and I felt the same as you in this poem. Best poem I've read in a ...

Yet again you express my feelings towards a guy that I like. Amazing! Great work! I just love this poem! Zalex

I love this poem! It explains how I feel also. (If it is about your feelings for a guy.) Amazing! Great Job! Zalex

Very discriptive. I have said this before, you probably realize. Your poems confuse me at the beginning and that's what I love about them! They are really good! Good Job! ...

It's kimd of confusing but I really do like it! It's very original! Good Job! Zalex

Compared to what I've read lately this is really good! I love the concept! Good Job! Zalex

That was very good, I liked the feeling of it. At one part I got confused (It's probably because I'm younger than you though, I guess I don't understand as ...

It isn't bad but I wouldn't say it is amazing. As others have been saying, don't use smiley's, but on the other hand I do think it's okay to use ...

I have two words for you. Very good.

That is an amazing poem and you really know how to get to a person. I really liked how you made us like the man so much then rip it ...

I always love stories like this because I love mysteries. keep writting!:):):)!!! from Zalex!

I have done one of these before and the mistake I made, is the same one you did. It's not really a mistake but you can definetly split the story ...