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Very good :] I love your vocabulary, it's wonderful and perfect for the feelings you portray here. I'm not very good at reviewing poems like this, because I'm generally to ...

thankyou :]

thankyou for everyone that posted there comments, they really helped. I think I've gathered that I need to change the third, and to be honest reading it through I agree ...

Okay, I think we need to except Tarragon College is dead :D I'm mainly saying this because it's been restarted so many times and the main reason it's failing now ...

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not really going to understand this until I find the right image to attatch to it of the advert i'm analyzing. Ever wanted Beyonce’s curves or Kate Moss’s stick thin ...

Every new beginning, comes from some beginnings end. Every time you kill me, I am born again. Every time you close that door, Another door is opened. And every time ...

okay guys, but get a move on :]

haha, that's if Sonnet says yes.

also Sonnet, you have to say whether you accepted Quin's proposal or not :p

Right th B it is. If we could say that Sonnet finally was rescued, it looked like it was going that way and that everyone has tried to go back ...

Okay, feel free to disagree with this, but I think we should skip forward a month. I can tell this storybook is slowly withering and dying, and maybe that's partially ...

ahh, I think no one else should go get captured now. This is getting a little tedious

Quin Quin's wings grew heavier and heavier as he flew. He smelt her scent in the wind but it was old now and difficult to follow. He flew confused, onwards, ...

Hey I'm Izzy, I'm just giving you a quick review. First of all may I say you have some impressive vocabulary here, nice work, and I like the frame work ...