ZaddieCaso

Wow!!! LOVE THIS. It's crazy, that's what I like about it; because every single line you get this burst of alliteration and then wonderfully strange images popping into your head. ...

Hey , nice poem you have here. I like the idea of the cycle, day in, day out, always hurt and pain. Well I don't like it, but I think ...

The first thing I noticed is that you capitalize the first letter of every sentence. I don't find this nessescary, but it is truly up to you.. I laughed for ...

I really liked this. Granted the vocoularly is simplistic and It could use working on for a bit but I loved the structure of the stanzas and how it ended. ...

ohhh, this is such a lovely idea! I think i might try to do it!

hey Sonny, You asked what a lilo was. A lilo is a very common word in England, don't know if it is anywhere else. It's just an inflatable bed or ...

Very short song I wrote. Feels weird because I've been on this site so long and this is the first lyrics I've ever posted. Chords: Em C G D (played ...

This is a bit jumbled up, hope you guys like it :] An Ode to Beauty Sugar sweet, Her breath is like fairy dust against your fingertips Hot summers, Tulips, ...

Illness

Okay, I actually liked this which surprised me. It's quite typical, psychopathic murderer stereotype but I liked it, it was edgy. I don't have much to add other than the ...

hey guys, I agree with you on that line. Will make editing changes now. No Ofir this isn't going to carry on in the same fashion as the prologue, or ...

This is the prologue of a story I'm writing at the moment, it doesn't have a name so I'm just going to call it Steps for now unless you guys ...

Hey ella, nice song you've got here. I'm sure you've worked out some chords to this, I'd love to here it on the guitar sometime. I did like this, especially ...

hmmm, I understand about the description and the phrase show, don't tell. It's one I use quite a lot while reviewing peoples work. I wanted to make it blunt, lay ...

This was inspired by a piece of drama I did recently. I wanted to try to write in a different style than I usually do, I'm not sure how well ...