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Firstly I would just like to say you never leave your story un named when putting it on this site, not if you want feeback any way. Your story title ...

Hi mads, just giving ya a quick review, soz about town by the way ="MiriamHannah"]A cat skittered past her nervously and a bird flew so near to her that its ...

Rosabelle looked down through the branches and leaves of the tree. A broad smile on her face as John crept around below searching for her . The breeze swayed the ...

It sounds weird but theres an old oak at a park near me and when you climb right to the top you can see the whole of my city. I ...

[/quote] "Teenagers go through different stages of development, now for men these changes are slow, gradual, almost unnoticeable to those around them, unlike women... you can blink and everything abou

Just a short article I wrote about the conventional relationship regarding Juliet and her Father, was suposed to be for english hw but has progressed into my own article, feel ...

I didn't read all of this, after I got halfway through it was too hard to read. Your writing is incredibly detailed and intricate, as if your trying to squeeze ...

Quin Her eyes flashed expectantly as they sat under the old willow. It was his favorite tree in Tarragon, with rich brown branches and beautiful silver leaves that scattered the ...

soz that I haven't replied on Quin for a while, I'm stuck, have no idea what to write any help?

she's 15, so I suppose it isn't that much of a surprise he's drinking, will have to change that line :) thanks for reviewing

Just like to say thanks to all of the peeps that posted here, especially Blink and Rosy-Unicorn, this was just a short extract from my book, probably should have put ...

(sorry I haven't been writing a lot, just had all my SATs exams) Quin Quin spotted Sonnet immediately, her mouth open in a half smile. HE tried to smile but ...

Quin Quin looked out onto the lone night. The clouds seemed to off rolled to the side, revealing hosts of new stars he'd never seen before. He was perched on ...

i think i'll give someone else a chance :)

What an intriguing piece of writing. At first I was a little confused at where you were going with this but obviously it seems to of gone somewhere as I ...