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I know your not ment to put compliments on this site but I couldn't help myself. I was going to review your story so I read through it, searching for ...

I think this is wonderfully imaginative story and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I do wonder if you have given away too much in the prologue and sometimes the information ...

Hi, I'm izzy and I will be reviewing your work today. The moon shone brightly in the cold, dark night. Ghostly clouds sailed in the sky, sometimes covering the full, ...

I was very hesitant when reading through your plan, firstly is sounded so typical of a love story. It's a story line I have read and heard so manny times ...

Okay, I don't think anyone really uses this story book anymore. Sad, it was getting to be a good one anyway, anyone want to revive it?

Hi, is there room for one more person

Hi, is there still room for one more person?

Hi I did like this poem a lot, and I thought it was pretty ironic to put a smiley on the end. The only thing I would have to say ...

Okay, for today I will only review the first chapter because I am short for time. But this story really drew me in, I liked the fact you kept its ...

I have been writing this for ageees now. I don't think its very good but I can't stop writing it. Please read and review, although I doubt you'll read rthe ...

i really like this, the use of swearing seemed almost appropriate here.

Hiya Mads, won't be a long review because I can see you at school and talk to you about it god,its getting better. Your writting has improved so much since ...

Hi i'm izzy and I will be reviewing your work today. Firstly I would just like to say I believe you are a very talented writer, especially for your age. ...

This is a nice little story. At first I found myself critising the simplistic lauguage but after a while I got so sucked into the story that It didn't matter. ...

sorry i haven't been posted in a while, am really busy with exams