ZaddieCaso

"I was kidnapped. My parents snapped into action... then rented my room" cracks me up everytime

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A good story, I just read your story "I need you to write" and thought that it was your only writing style but clearly its not. “Want to come play ...

Better than the last chapter. I do really like this story, which makes it hard to write anything constructive. You ended this chapter well with "Objects which I could only ...

You definetly still keeping this story above the bar, but this chapter is a little still for me. She is back in the world of corn, seeing of these new ...

I'm actually quite jelous now. An answer to your question, yes you did keep it up to the same standard as before. It would be nice if you could make ...

Hi, i said I'd read the other chapters :) It was Friday afternoon. Two days after I fainted in the cafeteria. I still wince whenever I remember that embarrassing situation. ...

I've seen this story a lot, just on the forums and when random work pops up but I never clicked on it, always wanted to. Its the title that really ...

I like the lyrics but I think you need another verse explaining about the butterfly girl bit. Maybe going into detail about why she is butterfly girl, maybe she flew ...

anyoen gonna say, what it is that were supose to get?

Hi, I really liked this poem though as the rhyming patterns are inconsistent it spoils the general flow and effective that you are trying to potray. I am for you ...

one of my first completed books is called Chasing Shadows, at first I kind of had a heart attack and thought someone had copied it, but no fear :)

I'm sorry but this picture comes up huge on my screen, is there anyway you can shrink it as only a quarter with fit on at any given time. From ...

I think the angles perfect, which is hard to achieve especially while moving. I try to take photo's with the sun at angles like that, shinning at the camera but ...

wow, what an articulate piece of writting. No, i'm sorry but I feel that you are using this site lightly to say the least. Its supose to help people and ...