ZaddieCaso

Ohh, go with blue moon. That is more original than all of those other ideas that are so cliche and over used good luck with your story

I actually just finished the novel I was writing about a girl who can shapeshift. My best friend Sarah and I always joke about her features looking extraordinarily feline, and ...

I think I wrote my first independent story (outside school) when I was about six. It was about a girl who found a baby mermaid and raised it by herself. ...

Hi, I know you asked me to comment on this chapter so I will. I have to say I think you deserve a proper review from me by now, so ...

*so agree with you, they are soo sweet but gotta cause a little bit of drama so... Quin He stared at her, throat dry. The music continued to sound tunelessly ...

Name:Bray Race: Half Aryan, Half unknown Race Appearance: Short for an Aryan, she has lilac eyes, white hair. Considered an outcast because of her colored hair, small elf like face ...

I put this in other fiction but after quite a few comments I have reposted it here, seems better suited :) Just a short monologue I thought i'd try, something ...

okay, i'm wondering if this really happened because this is non-fiction, and you should probably be posting in the fiction sections instead of here.

*cue sonnet maybe?

Hi, just giving you a quick review ‘This is the tale of the mysterious and immortal freedom fighter ninja comma known only by the name whispered on bated breath during ...

A ghost story? I'm really confused now, does she have dreams of ghosts? Or abondonment issues? I think you need to specify a bit more

Is this a multi chapter story?

You know how I wrote that, I imagined I was you. Not literally, but in the way you speak. :) thanks for teh review

I don't think I can edit this, its a bit to strong. I always read about situations like yours, but there in books. Its all fiction, not real. But this ...

The killers viva la viva!!!