ZaddieCaso

Just a short story, appreciate some reviewing When we were younger, I remember sitting on the monkey bars in the snow. We took off our hats and scarves, one at ...

Quin Quin flew, higher and higher, riding the warm air thermals upwards until Tarragon was a speck beneath him. He had always pondered the thought of running away. It was ...

nah na nah!!! Quin ran away!!

Quin was terrified of losing her again. She paused at the tree trunk, waiting for him. The timing was perfect, all he had to say was three small words. But ...

Can I just say to Ofir, when you put that you didn't think Miriam Hannah understood how dark the holocaust was, I think that she can understand it. This story ...

oh come on, isn't anyone going to review?

Quin Quin looked at Ashlyn. On any other day he wouldn't of called her weird. He thought it was almost hypocritical, him calling anyone weird, as he and sonnet lived ...

Quin He leant heavily against the side on the building, staring into the night. He hated himself for it, for not saying anything back. He hated himself for walking away. ...

Okay, I take back the post I put on Chapter 7- part one. Plenty of plot going on here, I'm happy :)

Unlike the last chapter I can't find anything other than the above that I would change. I am getting a little worried though. As I put on your last chapter, ...

Thats actually a really good idea, I've been so caught up with the next book that I forgot the potential of the first. The whole idea of "the darker side ...

Okay, i just have to say Anonymous-A , I think that comment was a bit ridiculous. Sure I'm not a guy but I don't agree with what you say about ...

I loved this poem, and as the above review you can tell its from a child's point of view. The only thing I would say your consistent in that fact. ...

I think you need to separate this into verses for one, but thats something basic that should really be done with all poems with this rhyming pattern. And just one ...

This got better half way through, I only understood it till the end though. I think you could have written that in nearly half the words and had a better ...