ZaddieCaso

Hi Septemb, I'm Izzy I agree with the above, this should be a prologue. I will give you a review anyway but what I recommend is writing a longer chapter ...

:) Furniture is a tricky one Mine would have to be my bed, it's soo comfy. You study foreign langauges! Which ones? I don't have any patience with foreign languages, ...

Hi Septemb, Just thought I'd introduce myself. My username is Zaddie Caso, but everyone calls me Izzy :). I love writing fantasy and narrative poetry, although sometimes I go a ...

Hi equalize, It seems you everything has pretty much been explained. I just wanted to introduce myself. My username is ZaddieCaso but everyone calls me Izzy and I basically live ...

Hi Joel, Welcome to YWS :D There are absolutely loads of anime and manga lovers here. If you got to the literature index, you can find art and photography. There's ...

Hi I'm ZaddieCaso, but you can call me Izzy. Welcome to YWS! This site is great, you can post your scripts here to. It really helped me improve my writing ...

Thanks, this was really helpful :)

Hi, sorry this has taken me so long to get around to. But your right, this should just be the initial draft, it still needs some work. I have to ...

Hi omsvmars, just giving you a quick review :) “You really don’t have to do this you know.” Yes, I knew. I knew that I didn’t have to do any ...

again, please re-size this

Hi and welcome to YWS I just wanted to say that I was a bit taken a back when I read my first critique, I felt so insulted. But you ...

Rip it to shreds :) Misguided Angel She holds a mauve rose At the crest of her breast And stares out upon the calm, A blue captive ocean in his ...

Okay, this is my absolute baby. It has taken me yearsss to edit it and I think most of the grammar is fine... i think anyway :S. Please point out ...

I LOVE pie :D TUBM is 14

wow. I just read all 15 chapters of this at once! I didn't even review, I didn't even analyze the text. Your story just sucked me in, it was like ...