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Hi, I'm Izzy. Welcome to YWS! On YWS we have a few rules; -Please rate your work. This allows it to show up on the YWS main page if it's ...

That sounds great, is it posted on the site yet? Izzy

Hi Jazmine, Welcome to YWS, why not come down to the welcome forum and introduce yourself. On YWS we always try to check out grammar and edit our work the ...

Hi elly, What I would say is that I think you should keep the cliches. This is what your poem plays off, almost a kind of sing song poem. I ...

Just something I wrote on the spur of the moment. It happens, Without farce Or reason. You don't know, Until your heart starts beating that little bit faster. And your ...

Hi FrontLinePillar, I'm Izzy and welcome to YWS You know you can post your novel on YWS in the Advanced Critques section. Here people can help you edit it and ...

Hi Elly, I've seen you around on the site a lot but I don't think I've ever reviewed anything of yours, so here goes Okay, I didn't actually find many ...

Banned for excessively using this post.

Now your banned for pointing out my predictability!

Banned for making me want to eat chocolate with your user name!

You vain hugger-mugger!!! I love that! Hugger-mugger, it's like a mug that gives our cuddles.. aww

When I was five I used to eat paper :S

10/10 it's a cow!!!

haha, i thought at first. Breaking dawn! Breaking Dawn

Hi Butternut, Welcome to YWS. It's great that you want to get a novel published, in fact there is a section in the litreature forums called Advanced Critiques, here you ...