ZaddieCaso

8/10, sweet :)

Okay Julie. I reviewed another poem of yours today and the same principles go for this one. You should have a capital letter at the start of each new line. ...

Hi star.shine, Welcome to YWS I'm ZaddieCaso but everyone calls me Izzy, I'm happy to talk anytime :) We just have a few rules on YWS, to keep everyone happy, ...

Hi Jess, I love Jodi Picoult's books, especially My Sister's keeper. Have you seen the film yet? I saw it and was really disappointing as they changed the ending, worth ...

Hi Julie, Izzy again. Just giving you a quick review :) Firstly I shall tell you what EllyMelly told me; Everytime That you start a new line Inside a Poem's ...

Okay, I think I've got the formalities of this nailed down but if you spot anything please tell me :) Hysteria A shattered voice Reaching, touching Calling out A cry ...

As above, I always type when I'm at home but I carry a notebook everywhere I go. It means if I'm on the bus or something or have a free ...

I googled young writers and this site came up, I thought I'd give it a go.

Bravo Indigo! You are absolutely right. No matter how unnatural abortion is, being raped is an abuse upon her body. If she is impregnated it is even worse, you cannot ...

Hi Calben, Welcome to YWS, why don't you come down to the welcome forum to introdce yourself :) I'm ZaddieCaso by the way, but people call me Izzy. Okay, The ...

Hi Vera, I'm Izzy This is a lovely little piece. I would agree with Kinera as this needs to be more spaced into verses. While I edit I shall just ...

I just recently read "The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time I have to say this is a very good book. I was very pessimistic at first about ...

Okay, well if you give me a pm when It is I'd be happy to critique it for you. I haven't done many long critiques but hay, practice makes perfect ...

Thanks to everyone that commented! *hugs*

Hi roon, I'm Izzy, just gonna give you a quick review. I have to say I looked through this and I was enchanted, what a wonderful piece. You have obviously ...