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Re: Ten.
ahh, i'm soo sorry guys. I forgot about this. Can someone update me on what's happening so I can get Farrow into the story.
Sep 15, 2009 -
Re: Outside Tarragon College- we need new people!!
Oh my god guys, so sorry I haven't posted in ages. I feel really bad, just been busy with school and everything. Okay, here goes. Quin Before Quin could process ...
Sep 15, 2009 -
Re: Chapter One _ He and She R
Hey beth, review as promised :] Again, sorry if I'm harsh. Sooo...I'm gonna say now that I really didn't like the first part of this. I thought it was confusing. ...
Sep 15, 2009 -
Re: Love is blind
fixed the italics now, the first and second person will make sense.
Sep 14, 2009 -
Re: Fetus (1)
Okay, Thank you soo much to everyone how has posted and helped me improve this, I'm very great-full. I'm just putting the next chapter on now so check it out, ...
Sep 14, 2009 -
Re: Outside Tarragon College- we need new people!!
"I'll be fine" she mouthed as the officers forced her forward, yanking hard on her cuffed wrists. Quin followed a step behind them trying to reach for one of sonnet's ...
Sep 11, 2009 -
Re: Outside Tarragon College- we need new people!!
Sorry this is so late but I wanted to give the april and ashlyn thing time to fan out. Quin "What?" he stammered "I said I'll marry you," she looked ...
Sep 10, 2009 -
Re: Fetus (1)
You got the wrong end of the stick KJ, the woman isn't going to die. Her baby died inside her and she has to deliver it still born. Thanks for ...
Sep 9, 2009 -
Re: Short Story
I don't think you need to go into any detail about Alice. She's more a symbol of hope of your MC, it could have just been a stranger he talked ...
Sep 7, 2009 -
Re: New photo.
I actually really liked this photo, I think it's beautiful and you've made something as simplistic as a grate in the ground look artistic. I do agree with Kamas though, ...
Sep 6, 2009 -
Re: green hawk
You used photo shop? Wow, that's incredible. I've seen lots of photo shop Aime and that sort of thing on YWS, but nothing like this. Wow. I'm not expert but ...
Sep 6, 2009 -
Re: Nothing
Wow, that's a great picture. I've done a little quad-biking, but nothing like that. What I would say is that if you ever have a chance to shoot a picture ...
Sep 6, 2009 -
Re: Outside Tarragon College- we need new people!!
just gonna jump in :] Quin She sighed and rolled onto her side "Come on Sonnet, don't be like that" said Quin She left out a loud huffing sound, he ...
Sep 5, 2009 -
Re: Fine, just Fine
Hey, I'm Izzy. Just giving you a quick review :] Hiding things was what I did best. I like this first line a lot, it drew me in. I always ...
Sep 5, 2009 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
I got the same error as Master_Yoda, this comes up whenever I try to open portfolios. SQL ERROR [ mysql4 ] You have an error in your SQL syntax; check ...
Sep 5, 2009
