Zabuza825

I made a parody of "Beijing Welcomes You" but I have one problem, its in Japanese. I'm working on a English version but in the mean time can I post ...

Overall I thinks its great and interesting but I still think that there can be some expanding done in some places for example could you expand on the speakers emotions? ...

Good story, I also think it should go into sci-fi. It has a rather abrupt ending, and in some places you could have expanded. For example, the doctors personality. Maybe ...

Hello, I loved this story. A boy living during the Cold War at the end of the Cuban Missile Crisis, I love this setting! The story touched me as I ...

“Hey mister boss guy, I got your painting.” Said Ali. “Good. Give it to me.” Replied the man. “Here you go.” Said Ali and he gave the painting to the ...

Revised. Glad you liked it, I can't seem to get rid of my old habits. Yes it does say Book 1.

painted a great picture of what was happening. Good spelling and grammar. I loved it.

Here you go, Review Request. Thanks in advance.

My site (LINK) currently has no members other than me and a friend so I did some Google searching and here I am! I just write stories based off the ...

Sir Dacron pressed his horse on through the rain. Thunder rolled ominously above them. It was not often that Dacron felt fear, but now it had wrapped its iron hand ...

Intriguing and dramatic, I like it. I don't see how this is related to the Red Scare, but I do see some relation to the Cold War. I admit I'm ...

For 4 short paragraphs that was interesting, a lot way conveyed in that small thing. How the soldier felt while on a mission, on the battlefield, after the war and ...

I liked the story, however nothing much happens in it other than us learning that there is a banker coming and a conversation between the main character and her mother. ...

Rated 16+ for violence, references to crime and minor language. All events depicted in this is purely fictional, any similarities to real life people or events are purely coincidental. Contains ...

I loved it, and the button thing is interesting too. At first I wondered what the button you were referring to was, then I read it and I think I ...