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I'll get you edited tomorrow... hopefully. Your's is longer than Crysi's. *sigh* Have over 15 pages of editing. -Z

And that is hovering an inch off the ground... Some hack job with 'Word Painting'. -Z

Hmmmmm... I may need to get in touch with my feminine side and go to one of those sites. But I am afraid of the dark, not a girl, nor ...

My favorite animal is a wind blasted cat... -Z

For main characters that are male... Lots of "R" starting names seems very strong and up-lifting. Rand O'Thor in Wheel of Time, Richard in that Goodkind series, Robert with the ...

Hmmmmm... We have wolves, and we have dragons... Interesting. You guys should get along great, as they are both a carnivorous creature with sharp teeth and a nasty temper. Fuuuu! ...

Got yours done too... But like Sammy, I need to transpose yours into words. I'll do yours next, as Sammy has a long story to edit. I save the longest ...

I have yours all cut up... It's just I need to now transpose them into words. I edit like how your teachers grade an essay. I have pen marks all ...

Alright for the editing I have to present on this thread is Drizzt's beginning story of the village attack. You can find the original here: Okay... I'd like to start ...

Okay all of you... Instead of bombarding your wonderful stories with my editing and constructive critisism, I'm going to post all of my editing on here. You can look at ...

It'll take me awhile... Like till 4 o'clock in the moring with all the others I have to edit. Editing allows me to find myself again, a way of getting ...

lol... I know I'm going to blow my head on this one. When I looked at your length, I noticed two times the editing I have with the others. It's ...

Cool, cool... I'll get back to you on this one k? I'm in middle of cutting it up. -Z

What do you want me to do? Shall I edit it? -Z

Alrighty then Here it goes For the first part For the first part, I had a little trouble picking up the correlation to the first paragraph. Anywho Let s start ...