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Re: Pygmalion
Hello there JP! Here as requested. First of all, thanks for the request. :) I won't really nitpick every line because I think this is pretty well written and quite ...
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: Lightning Platoon 106 prologue
Hello there! Here to you-know-it. It was yet another peaceful autumn day. I find this as an average sentence but always think that this is the part where you grab ...
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: The YWS Cliques
You made me laugh. This is awesome. :smt043 I think I'm one of the chatters and fifty percent freak. xD
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: A Teenage Life (DEAD!)
Andrew: The sound that the basketball made as it bounced against the hardwood floor echoed throughout the gym. The place was so calm and Andrew felt a little bit happy. ...
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: Invincible <3
Hello there! I think you're new. So I just want to say that if you're writing a poem, be sure to do a good format of it. It seems like ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: A Teenage Life (DEAD!)
Andrew: "Are you contemporary too?" Andrew asked suddenly. Bewildered, the red-haired girl jumped a little and a slight snicker came right out from Andrew's mouth, almost exposing his pearl-white teet
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Comedy.
*swims in the ocean* Hello AquaMarine! Here to review. Nitpicks on the way! Oh, comedy: h e could come with a smile, twitching deft fingers, and a lashing wit - ...
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: Your request makes me so happy!
done! anyone else? :3
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: The Message
Hello there! Here to review. This piece is neat and clean but a total cliffhanger! :smt036 I find this interesting and a bit refreshing, especially when you chose the beach ...
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: Popularity Wars
Hello there, WW! Here as requested. I won't go nitpick everything because others have pretty covered up those errors already. Sorry in advance if there's any repetition going over here, ...
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: The Perfect Voyage ~ Starting
~Jamie Kyo~ Who is just that Lady O'Hanley? "What a great way to welcome a passenger who's been travelling for eight hours straight just to get here on this ship," ...
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: The "Just The Right Song" Song For Writing
Hearing it makes it comfortable. Perfect combination, btw. ;)
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: The story of me
I know one thing: you spend almost three hours for this. O.o....What does that even mean? random thoughts... lol. xD
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: Mirror Girl
Hello there, Lum-eh! *laughs* The only thing that really bothers me is... nothing. haha. As far as I could see, this is very well-written and the things that I like ...
Jul 9, 2010 -
Re: Your request makes me so happy!
done! :3
Jul 9, 2010