Yuriiko

Hello there! Sorry for the quite delay because I just had a class overnight activity. First and foremost, you really need to capitalize your "I"s. It's not good to look ...

Caroline: As AJ and I sat down, I examined the unfamiliar students around me. They didn't seem to be nervous at all. My hands were resting on my lap which ...

*hearts this* Sounds great to me too!

Guys, I'm not going to be here for two days due to my class overnight retreat. So please keep me in especially the camp night. Thanks in advance! :D

Forest- That's Nate (cut board) at your back. Good photo by the way. ;)

Done! anyone else?

Hello there! Here to review. So I can see that there have been a lot of critiques there and I won't go bothering each line since others have pretty much ...

Bolt, you missed something... You and No Census. xD

Hello there, Isaac! Welcome to YWS! Environmental engineering? Psh. It's just a piece of cake! *laughs* Kidding. No actually, I think that's awesome. It's good to hear that you're enjoying ...

for being an avid fan of Mcfly dude! xD

Hello there Kyou! Here for my second review. I layed her down on the ground with her head slightly leaned against a tree. I think you meant "laid"- it's the ...

I nominate all the green people... cause you all have been very helpful and so kind!

What's "Fahrvergnügen" anyway? *Googles it*

how about camping the school? So it would be like a camp night before school. Better talk about this in the DT.

Jamie Kyo: I'm so late, probably Angelique's waiting there for me with boiling temperature already. Jamie Kyo paced abruptly through the narrow dark hallway, her heels almost killing her. Without ...