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Banned for using "then" instead of "than"! :P

Caroline: I couldn't think. I felt as if my heart had just been torn apart when I saw Blaise's still body on the wet grassy ground. The rain poured but ...

Done, Calli. Anyone else?

Pfft. Sorry for posting but I just want to let you guys all know how "awesome" my car looks like. source-deviantart.jpg Anyways, congratulations on the races, atomic.

Banned of being so slightly and lightly Devil! XD

Oh hello there, Natasha! Welcome aboard! I know you're going to enjoy here as much as I do. So, if you want a review, any questions or if you just ...

Hello there, Calli! Here as requested. :wink: Nitpicks, comments highlighted in RED . *removed*. Add "the" for a smoother flow of the sentence. *removed*. Perhaps you might want to add ...

HI there, Skinnykins! Here to you-know-what. :wink: First of all, if there is Team Edward and Team Jacob in Twilight then there is Team Oliver and Team Richard here too! ...

Hello there, Skinnykins! Here to review your third chapter. Nitpicks, comments and errors in RED . “Ollie?” Ella spoke softly as she gently shook Oliver’s arm. “Ollie, can you hear ...

go! :3

This. Is. Dead.

Thanks for the reviews, guys. I'm going to work on this if I could find a vacant time. :3

That's too bad since they can't have at least a point or a star. XD

Hello there again, Skinnykins! Here to review. There wasn’t a sound to be heard, it was ever so calming . That was one of the things I loved about living ...

Done! :3 Anyone else?