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Re: Writing Contest about My Nana
hmmm guess not.......but I made the paragraphs easier to read.
May 5, 2008 -
Re: Writing Contest about My Nana
Ahhhhh!!!!! Sorry I guess the tab button doesn't work! I'll fix it!
May 5, 2008 -
Re: Writing Contest about My Nana
[pre]Woman of Distinction The woman who I think should earn the title of Woman of Distinction is my Nana. She deserves this title because she has overcome so many obstacles ...
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Re: Hi!
Hello! I just joined like almost 30 minutes ago, and I thought I should introduce myself before I get off for the night. Well, I like to write a little ...
May 4, 2008 -
Re: Emo Poem
I love your poem. It has so much emotion. It has hate but for some reason shares love at the same time. The poem sounds like Romeo and Juliett ( ...
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Re: Lonely Dog
Wow! This poem made me think! If I'm right it's about three dogs. Three very different but very similar dogs. The poem had quite a bit of emotion that was ...
May 4, 2008 -
Re: God of the Underworld: Chapter 1: (revised)
Um....your story plot is actually very good. But I do have to say there is not enough description in your story. If you put more emotion and if you really ...
May 4, 2008