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Re: Her from the Bus
This is a lovely piece. the images you conjure are clear and concise; giving the reader only simple details of the bus, the girls appearance and actions is enough for ...
Jan 13, 2018 -
Re: The girl in the woods- Chapter one
This is an intriguing piece. The fact that its written from a young boys point of view with basic language and simple sentences emphasises characterisation. its new and fresh as ...
Dec 30, 2017 -
Re: Death and the Hypochondriac
Hi Ellasnotebook! At the beginning of your piece the punchy and blunt description drops the reader right into the stark and cold images you are giving us - this is ...
Dec 29, 2017