YellowAeroplane

Hello! welcome- I haven't been around long either. If you ever want someone to read your stuff- i like poetry and short stories- so I'll be around. Good luck!

Good, I like it. Maybe a little more suspense, but otherwise it is really good

My old stuff wasn't exactly perfect. I'm a year older now, and writing more than ever. I would put up my work, but I don't really have enough points. Oh ...

I liked it a lot- very powerful and effective.

Great poem! I love paintballing :)

great poem. Very effective

Hi. I'm an English/ Irish kid too. I love writing and alawys have. Also, I did exactly the same thing as you. I posted two of my story openings before ...

hi! The same thing happened to me with the other kids at school. Onbe of my other friends wants to be an author too, which is cool. It's a good ...

yay! i love zombie stories. It's really effective and believable- which not all of these type of stories are. Well done and please continue!

I wrote this story for school last year. There are a few mistakes, and some of the grammar isn't that good- sorry Olly Masters I stared up at the sky; ...

great. fast and exciting. Please carry on with it, it's really good!

Cool, I love things about school. Great dialogue, realistic and effective. I hope you carry on with it.

Wow, that's amazing. Really effective and realistic.

hi. i like meeting new people on here. I'm new too. I hope you have fun.

i loved reading this. Have you posted any of the other chapters. It's great, and it flows well. Keep up the good work! :)