Yanni1995

Hey! This is a very beautiful piece. I couldn't find any obvious mistakes so all I can say is keep up the good work!

This was so sad. It was sadly beautiful. There was a lot of emotion in your writing and I could literally feel everything that you were, probably, feeling while you ...

Chapter 2 “What are you doing here?” I asked him calmly but coldly. “Nothing much… I’m just visiting my old school.” He said then looked into Marc’s eyes. “My old ...

I can't really find anything wrong with it besides you not mentioning the main character's gender. it's a little confusing if you're not paying close attention to the words you're ...

Hi, Yanni1995 here! just wanted to say that this poem is really meaningful. it's beautiful as well. Now, on to business. As they lay here thinking and looking at each ...

Hi, it's Yanni1995 here. I'm new at YWS and still trying to get used to things around here. First off, let me say that I absolutely loved this poem. I ...

This is a really good poem. The flow of rhythm is really good and I loved the way you used the words. Keep it up.

Chapter 1 “Troy, do you really have to leave?” I asked my husband. We were in bed after a passionate bout of lovemaking. I had just told him I was ...